Young people who live at home have several advantages and the outline

Young people who live at home have several advantages

Home is a wonderful place for every single one because it creates a peaceful heart. It is the place for sharing between every family member (communicate/negotiate), the place for laughing and crying together, and the place for emerging the memories in every one’s life. It is a good place for everybody especially for youth. In other words are young people who live at home may bring several advantages (Thesis Statement). Why it is so? It is because some reasons are:

a.       The young would not easily contaminate by surrounding (bad effects that may be created by wild life; free sex, drugs, drinks and other violence)

b.      By staying at home most, the young can do their positive activities maximally (study for their academic and help their parents)

c.       The young would not easily be contaminated by some diseases that would be got from outside (smoke syndrome and etc)

Adv (a)

The surrounding would give negative influence for young people because they may have made some relationship with their friends whom have bad attitude. Over time, they will imitate their friends. Mostly, it is uncontrolled. Why it is so? It is because the young would meet their friends outside the home so the parents could not watch. Sometime, the young would be a liar to their parents because of their bad friends. The surround is danger for young so the parents must have control most to the young by letting the young go outside or hanging around with the friends that bring them to be better; the friends that free from some drinks, drugs and free sex.

Moreover, by staying most at home, the young can do the homework and study for their academic concern maximally. They feel comfort to do those things at home because it would bring peaceful condition; would not be noisy as the outside may offer. Indeed, at home, they can help the parents especially when the parents have to do their job at home (home industry). Therefore, staying at home explicitly would manage their time effectively at all.

Besides, by staying at home, they will be free from the smoke from vehicle and dust from outside. Those things could make the young getting cough and flu (THT troubles). Moreover, at home, the young will be free too from UV that may cause the skin getting darker and skin cancer. So, by staying most at home would make them stay healthy.

AN OUTLINE: YOUNG PEOPLE WHO LIVE AT HOME HAVE SEVERAL ADVANTAGES

I.                   Thesis statement:

Young people who live at home may bring several advantages

II.                Topic Sentence

A.    The young would not easily contaminate by surrounding

1.      Effected by wild life (free sex, drugs, drinks and other violence)

2.      They will imitate their friends

B.     The young can do their positive activities maximally

1.      Study for their academic concern

2.      Help their parents

C.     They young would stay healthy

1.      They will be free from the vehicle smoke and dust from outside

2.      They will free from the effects of UV (cancer)